Need some feedback

[flanflinger]

Sorry for ADVERTISING CHAPS

Cheers in advance chaps

[Spennyboy]

Your slogan is brilliant

I've no grounds to give you advice but it looks decent enough.

Quick glance i know what you do, who you are and how to get hold of you.

.. cowboys and indians... still cracking me up.... hehe

[mcdee]

right away id ditch the "cowboys n indians" mate,makes you sound amateurish.nice bright sign otherwise.

[mc.dodd]

use the i as your centre piece instead of the l for the signals.. your spacing needs adjusting in 'sky installs' etc strap line.. and maybe it all just a little too blue in appearance.. add another colour to break it up a little.. but as spenny says straight to the point.. I would maybe consider dropping the indians bit also..

just my initial thoughts..

[flanflinger]

nice one chaps was goind to make the L into an aerial mast..
and add a few bits...

[cosmicma]

the design is great but it reads like a business card rather than a shop sign
i would be tempted to drop the cowboy n indian bit too and close the gap it was taking up to get away from the business card look

[mc.dodd]

well pointed out, as a rule shop signage is a longer dimension than that..of course that depends on your available space..

[flanflinger]

8ft x 4ft is all I have its only a small unit (thats the size of the sign) not the unit

[neo2810]

Another vote to drop the slogan, sound cheap... The rest of the suggestions are pretty much spot on.

[Cenus_]

I'd lose the "T:" there's no need for it, everyone will understand it's a phone number.

Otherwise looks very professional.

[flanflinger]

woooo some gooduns there

but there is also a list to the right with all payment methods etc.. openin times.. will be putting a 24hrs sign nex to the number

[flanflinger]

just revised me sign... want to keep the slogan... but removed some off the mess

SORRY FOR ADVERTISING CHAPS

[Mickey]

Drop the cowboys and indians. Too many people are useing it and looks newbish
rest looks fine

[flanflinger]

noted ... but keeping slogan hence the apache ....

[ekkl]

Where it says "Sky TV Repairs, Sales, Phone extensions" I would definitely use another font for that. I think the one you are using is quite amateurish, something my kids always use when they mess about making posters and that. The first thing I see when I see that kind of font is something kids use. Try it using a straight font, not a curved one as you have if you get what I mean.

Other than that I would say it's alright, straight to the point and nothing gimmicky except for the 'Indians' bit but I like that!!!

Good Luck by the way.

[flanflinger]

sound... was havin trouble thinking of fonts for the bullet points.

[mc.dodd]

what font did you use for your title mate?..

[tombott]

Not sure of your race, but deffo drop the slogan.
If it was in reverse you'd be accused of being racist, and in my opinion these things work both ways.
And PC terms aside, it just sounds shit.

Other than that, I think its looking good.

Another thought, do you need permission from Sky or Freeview etc for use of their logo's?
Might be worth checking before you get a load printed up.

[BBK]

Phone extensions

Note the spelling here

I have to say I like it, nice colours and fonts, if you need a website, let me know

[flanflinger]

no idea, but I will find out.. sent that out to tender then messed about with the design and fonts meself...