Starts out with..
then a bit of...
The spider wanted to play....
then a storm
Starts out with..
then a bit of...
The spider wanted to play....
then a storm
the spider one side on is great. nice shot.
Keep them coming Geezah.
What camera are you using?
The first picture with the balloons could be quite an interesting shot, there's some nice colours in it. I'd boost the contrast and saturation a bit, it also looks a little overexposed. You could maybe try a triptych of the whole water balloon fight.
The spider shots are a bit soft and a little too bright but the detail in the first and the stance you've captured in the second are good.
The storm shot is focussed too much on the aerial, it would be nicer to see more of the clouds and make the aerial more incidental to the shot.
Hope you don't mind my comments, just trying to help to see different perspectives.
MML
Thanks for the comments, it all helps to make my shots better.
All shot with a Fuji s5500 on sports mode.
The shots of the spider were took using a +10D macro lens
I done a little bit of tweaking in photoshop to crop and adjust levels slightly.
The one of the storm comming, I purposely centred the aerial so I could try shopping in lightening
All this was done out of the blue as the kids decided they wanted a waterfight.
Last edited by Geezah; 12th August 2008 at 10:15 PM.
liking the second spider one, a bit of selective colour on the balloons maybe
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