Latest Model shoot...

[crashtestmac]

Here is a few, there are more on flickr...!

NSFW because of the bikini shots but it depends on your boss i suppose..!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/photographicclarity

Should add these are straight off the camera...!

Spoiler:

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C&C Welcome

Mac

[crashtestmac]

Nothing....????

Miserable gits..!

[BertRoot]

Can't check these at work mate but looks a lively model. Added you on Flickr so will have a look at these later.

[inspectercoley]

Like number 4, and maybe 3 if not for the weird pout she doing...

[neo2810]

Number 2 is excellent Crash, however you've got 2 catchlights in each eye. Clone one of them out and it's a winner... In future, try and position the model so you're only getting a single catchlight.

[Bilbo_baggin]

I like the cheekiness of the last

Paul.

[peterc4]

liking the second one best very pro looking, not keen on that yellow background though

[CzarJunkie]

It's not for me. The models are more than a little ropey and you seem to need the attention. Just a couple of hours after your orginal post you are posting again asking why there's no response. Here's why I think why:

• The models are nothing special, in fact they are pretty ropey
• The camera work is nothing special
• There is absolutely no originality

I'd like to see you drop the slutty subject matter. Getting a positive response from a largely male audiance on a technology forum is a no brainer when you post photos of scantily clad females. No matter what they look like.

If you really want a critique then try something different.

[{{909}}]

I have to echo the point about originality, the model herself looks like shes pulled those same poses a million times so while she was easy to work with, she herself may have dictated the way the shoot went more than you.

[neo2810]

Ahhhh.... I've missed you CJ!

[nitelife]

LIke the second the best. NIce lighting in all. Not too keen on the others, no appeal for some reason.

[petey85]

Not bad at all. Nice bikini too...

[willp2003]

2nd one is the best of the bunch

[crashtestmac]

It's not for me. The models are more than a little ropey and you seem to need the attention. Just a couple of hours after your orginal post you are posting again asking why there's no response. Here's why I think why:

• The models are nothing special, in fact they are pretty ropey
• The camera work is nothing special
• There is absolutely no originality

I'd like to see you drop the slutty subject matter. Getting a positive response from a largely male audiance on a technology forum is a no brainier when you post photos of scantily clad females. No matter what they look like.

If you really want a critique then try something different.

Thanks for those kind words CJ....

For me this is different, i normally shoot families and sports.

Neo as said these are straight out of the camera and you have mentioned previously about the 2 catch light thing and it is something i normally would clone out.

Crash

[I Black Belt]

Pay no attention to these David Bailey wannabes mate. I liked them and it looks like she's got smashing tits.

[dpSparhawk]

Pay no attention to these David Bailey wannabes mate. I liked them and it looks like she's got smashing tits.

http://www.digital-forums.com/showthread.php?t=446828 -Sorry, had to

As for the images, personally, I only like the 2nd one. I think it's a very nice portrait, Composed well, nice lighting (as Neo says, two catchlights, remove one and sorted).
Got to say the last one just shouts CHAV to me I'm afraid although it is cheeky as Paul pointed out.

However, good on ya for doing them